Snake Quits Smoking

Title: โ€œThe Last Cigaretteโ€
Written by Joseph C. Jukic


INT. ABANDONED CHURCH โ€“ NIGHT

Rain drums against the roof of a bombed-out cathedral. Candlelight flickers across cracked statues and bullet-ridden stained glass.

SOLID SNAKE sits in the front pew, lighting his last cigarette with shaky hands. His sneaking suit is torn, his bandana soaked. The missionโ€™s overโ€”but the war inside isnโ€™t.

He exhales a plume of smoke that drifts toward a half-broken crucifix above the altar.

SNAKE
(to himself)
They told me nicotine keeps the nerves sharp… but all it does is remind me Iโ€™m still human.

A quiet voice answers from the shadows.

JESUS (O.S.)
And being human… is not a weakness, Snake.

Snake stiffens, reaching for his SOCOM pistolโ€”then stops.

A man steps into the light, barefoot, wearing a simple robe. His hair glows faintly in the candlelight, but his presence feels heavier than any weapon.

SNAKE
Who are you supposed to be… another hallucination?

JESUS
Youโ€™ve seen many ghosts, my son. But I am not one of them.

Snake studies him, suspicion melting into an uneasy calm.

SNAKE
…Jesus Christ.

JESUS
Youโ€™ve been calling my name for years, Snakeโ€”every time you took a breath between battles.

Jesus sits beside him. Snake looks at the cigarette, then at the nail wounds on Jesusโ€™ hands.

SNAKE
Iโ€™ve seen men die for a cause, seen clones made in your image, soldiers built to kill. You think one cigarette matters in a world like that?

JESUS
A small fire can still burn down a house.

Jesus takes the cigarette from Snakeโ€™s lips, holding it gently. The ember glows red like a dying sun.

JESUS (contโ€™d)
This isnโ€™t about smoke or lungs. Itโ€™s about what you crave when you think youโ€™re alone.

Snake looks away.

SNAKE
You werenโ€™t there in the jungle. You werenโ€™t there when I watched my brothers die. I needed somethingโ€”anythingโ€”to quiet the ghosts.

JESUS
I was there, Snake.
Every time you pulled the trigger and felt remorse, I was the silence after the shot.
Every time you lit one of these, I waited for you to remember you were already free.

Jesus crushes the cigarette between his fingers. No smoke, no ashโ€”just light.

SNAKE
So what now? You gonna heal me with some miracle?

JESUS
No. Youโ€™ll heal yourself.
Youโ€™ve carried burdens for nations, but never learned to carry peace for yourself.

Snake leans forward, his breath heavy.

SNAKE
Peaceโ€ฆ doesnโ€™t come easy.

JESUS
Neither did the cross.

They sit in silence. Rain stops. The first light of dawn cuts through the broken glass, casting a rainbow on the altar.

Snake looks down at the empty pack of cigarettes and drops it into the offering box.

SNAKE
Guess thatโ€™s my confession.

JESUS
And your redemption.

Jesus rises and walks toward the exit. Before leaving, he turns back.

JESUS
The battlefieldโ€™s not out there anymore, Snake. Itโ€™s in here. (touches his chest)
Fight wisely.

Snake nods, his voice gravelly but clear.

SNAKE
…Mission accepted.


EXT. CHURCH โ€“ DAWN

Snake steps outside. No smoke, no shadow. Just breath.

He looks at the rising sun, the horizon glowing like a rebirth.

SNAKE (V.O.)
They say old soldiers never die. Maybe they just stop running from themselves.

He walks into the lightโ€”unarmed, unafraid.

FADE OUT.
THE END.

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